Our love

Our love

A Poem by Leticia

You called our love to a hult.
My heart has stop.
The smile on my face has become my armer.
The words 'I am fine I promise' have become my shield.
I can not stop now
have to keep busy to forget the fact that you are no longer here.
That i will not get to feel your arms arround me.
That i will not get to feel your lips against mine.
That I will not get to hear you say I love you.
With my heart in your hands you have left.
Leaving a hallow space in my chest.

© 2016 Leticia


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Short sweet with a simple message. I love short poems with a clear message. Emotion in this poem is very powerful. I like this one a lot. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Leticia

8 Years Ago

Thank You.
Curtis.Lenker

8 Years Ago

Its no problem.

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Leticia
Leticia

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