Piece of my mind

There was nothing to see

nothing to feel

nothing to care about

Until you appeared in my life

there were many things to see

new places to explore

undiscovered feelings to come upon

The day became night

The night became day

without me knowing 

you took my heart away

with the first glance

without permission 

you took my piece of mind.

Reviews

[kbjami]

I really like this. It's simple, but I really hope that this is something to come straight from the heart