My Heart Raise

when you fine somebody that stills your breath away.

The first time I saw you,

you made my heart race.

 

The lessons I have learned

The heartache I have gone through

The memories I have accumulated

You make me forget all of that.

 

The first time I saw you,

You made my heart race.

 

The moon rises as a new night begging’s

The image of you plays in my dreams.

You are the hero that I have been waiting for

My prince charming

who with a kiss

will awaken me.

 

The last time I saw you

You made my heart race

Just like the first time all over again.

Reviews

[fireblossom]

This is a good poem. Your show longing and open yourself for the reader. I am sending you a private message with some pointers about word choice.

Keep up the good work.