why can't i write like writers do

why can't i write like writers do

full of ballyhoo & hip hop

slamming to a beat

teaching a song

right or wrong, it's the rhythmn

that catches the eye

lip parades smacking a sound

that can only be found

in writing by those who've lived

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[Candle in the wind]

lip parades smacking a sound!!1thats a great expression.The rhytm that you are talikng about prances through your poem.