Overdose

I'm not out of my mind

Long ago did i leave that behind.

I let my heart take the lead.

It brought me here, so close, so near.

Only for me to overdose-no one to care to one to hear.

Now my only wish is that I could be any where but here.

Author's Note

errr sorry about the setup or whatever its kinda hard to read the way i have it but im trying to fix it :]

Reviews

[Solitary Existence]

Short, but not so simple, huh? I dig the emotional content here. Only the form was a little confusing; it would have been easier to read if it had been written in one single stanza, but with the feet lined up correctly. Overall: great job.

[fotini]

i suppose these kind of "trips" are the worst kind......
the realization that all these crap in the end of the day won't help....
very nice work!!!

[LSS]

It reminds me of the puke remains after a drunks binge. All overinflated attractive deceptions seem to have the same effect; they leave to seduced naivete on a one-way TRIP. I enjoyed this sound poem, (One of your 't's should be a 'n' though).
LSS