If I could just let go.

If I could just let go.

A Poem by Disaster_is_an_Understatement

 

Life is passing you by before you even take the time to realize its slipping through your fingers going, going, gone just like the wind its so unpredictable, but follow it and oh the places you could go but you dont, you just let go- of everything  that you know thinking to yourself "Why did I, oh, why did I let go?"

 

© 2008 Disaster_is_an_Understatement


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I like this a lot. We're always as you said 'thinking to yourself "Why did I, oh, why did I let go?" We get so caught up in the why that we forget to do. This shows the human part of life. I like it...a lot.
Pepper...

Posted 15 Years Ago


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LSS
What a great analogy, a very keen observation. One to be proud of. I loved every comparison in your telling. How the essence of Life as wind slips thru your fingers. etc. nice!
LSS


Posted 16 Years Ago



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