Broken Face

A light shines through the darkness

This thought came from above

It could only be God

stabbing at the icy heart 

of the pained woman.

This woman whose heart 

had been broken,

torn apart and spread 

for all to stomp repeatedly

had a painful expression on her face.

This face, tired and dark

downtrodden and surrendered

whose heart had 

given up and floated in all directions

had a nebulous and bleak mindset.

Through the darkness

pierced a thought

of such dramatic proportions

that it changed the entire worldview

of one impactful woman.

Reviews

[Horizons]

Very interesting & so insightful piece you`ve written with such deep poetic words! Like the continuation of concept.. that kept the whole story around the proper functioning of words, situations, & feelings... boiled up inside heart. Nice imagery.

.. looking forward to reading your work!

[zainul]

This is an excellent write.
I read it twice to enjoy its beauty.

[Leticia Z]

Thank you for the great comment.
I believe inspiration comes from God.
It is such a joy and freedom to write!

[zainul]

Really,inspiration is divine.