in my head

in my head

A Poem by turpentine kisses
"

This is to do with my breakup,

"
Dark clouds brew above
Or is it just in my head
We shared laughs, we had love
Yet what is left now, this ache, this dread

Your friends would be the priority
Dare I question this, you would turn on me
Possessive, needy, crazy that was me,

The girls, yes those girls,
Was I not enough?
That crazy behaviour
It was all out of love
yet I pushed you away,
You said it was my fault
surely I wasn't imagining your distance
You talking to girls and your persistence
Or was that again, just in my head?
Along with the love we had
Gone, lost and dead.

© 2013 turpentine kisses


Author's Note

turpentine kisses
It's my first poem in a while, any comments much appreciated

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"along with the love we had
gone,lost and dead"

LOVE IT!!!
this piece is truly brilliant and touches the heart!
good work!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

turpentine kisses

10 Years Ago

Haha! Thank-you :)

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Added on December 2, 2013
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Tags: relationship, heartache

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turpentine kisses
turpentine kisses

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