Slipped

Slipped

A Poem by Marc

Falling
Deeper
Deeper
Cold
Cold
Colder than before
Colder than snow
Colder than ice
Deeper
Blue turns to grey
Turns to black
Lightly disappears
Becoming heavy
Faster
Faster
The bubbles escape
Surrounded by
Cold, cold water

© 2014 Marc


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register



Reviews

[send message][befriend] Subscribe
Nix
I picture someone clawing at the water above them as air escapes their lungs. Well written.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe
Flag Flag Writing


Stats

266 Views
1 Review
Added on January 27, 2014
Last Updated on January 27, 2014

Author

Marc
Marc

Victoria, British Columbia, Canada



About
I used to write. I like to write. I want to write more. more..

Writing
Freak show Freak show

A Poem by Marc
Tides Tides

A Poem by Marc
[more writing]