Green Eyes

Describing the eyes of my beautiful angel :)

To make it blunt, his eyes are green

But a kind of green

Chestnut brown rims his pupil

Then fans out like an exploding firework

Into a sea of emerald orb

The outside rims a dark color that mimics the middle of the Atlantic Ocean

This special pair of gorgeous eyes

Are opposite of my brown eyes with

Plain, grass-like green rimming my pupil

His gorgeous green eyes make mine look utterly

ordinary

His eyes speak to you like an abstract painting

There are two sides of him in his eyes

The protective, street-smart, side of him

That wakes up at 2 am some days to workout

It's the part that's strong like a soldier

With his walls up against the world

His other side is the side that lets his

Walls break and is simply a boy who grew up too fast

This side of him is caring, loving, and

Has the singing voice of an angel

In this side of him his eyes are screaming

For someone to never let him go

His eyes are a bright light above me

That take over me and I see

Nothing else other than the beautiful

Orbs in front of me

 

Author's Note

please be kind but constructive criticism is welcome :)

Reviews

[Linda alexander]

Then fans out like an exploding firework
Into a sea of emerald orb
The outside rims a dark color that mimics the middle of the Atlantic Ocean
This special pair of gorgeous eyes
Nicely written, well described the persons nature as well as beauty of the eyes and the orbit, enjoyed