I am

I AM
I am adjecent
i have been taking orders since,
i ordered my senses to use its 6 sense.
I am pleased with the way things goes
at least with the mindset of risks and
the artire peace had on when it was time for war
to forfit.
I am a particular,
with an act most people consider as special
but to “be” is only logical.
still ,the mind's thinking has made instict non optional.
I am a reason
i have tought through seasons,
i have understood lessons
but still time never did play with experence more often.
A turn out of difficulties, nd
when question came up for
answering,
For reasons or a reason for a reasonable response
which an answer still,was not foreseen.for this reason am stock btw time nd d future,with so many answers i have questions to.i solely admit that this is my prison.
I am education
i schooled my thoughts trough the reality of intensions.
Knowing is something not just knowledge can handle,but with experience as an epicenter to creative generations.
I schooled myself not just tru an instistution but tru
education.but i had to exist in the general intensions of mind illumination,at the cost of geniue reasons for me as education.
Now its a world wherei am a slave to intensions.
I am the end
what else could i be?
What else should i see
what screen would show me
or what kind would accept this script for a movie.
But yet i tried much as possible to finish this with questions.but it all depends on if the questions asked was or has been influenced by the wrong or has right
gone for summer? Yet again the questions.
This is all i could be for now
i cant be forever.
I am just the end.

Author's Note

what do u tink

Reviews

[MadalaJose]

Very philosophical. I can see the theme of identity, the persona trying to come out of the shadows, out of the crowd. and then there is also futility and fate, and actually that's how the poem ends. The persona has a sense helplessness to which s/he gives up and accepts that there is nothing s/he can do about it:
"Yet again the questions.
This is all i could be for now
i cant be forever.
I am just the end"

its a thought provoking piece. i like it