A Goodbye to Focus

lost in a wind that blows around
where have u gone to stay
i have looked for you everywhere and with each passing day
it seemed like u where no where to be found
focus how would u leave so soon
when the your bride needed u why would u hav gone
dispite consence as the cause of ur flirtacious habits
you had with mindset.
U still hurt ur bride(heart) the most innocent.
Ooh why ,now u have made her loose herself
with no tendable cause for response
she is now a pulley draging herself
with the thoughts of "how could u" tomenting her with hell.
Now you are also a shell of yourself
u have lost the meaning of what you are called
it should intrest you to know that seriousness called
and she said"you are a piece lost".
Say there was pleasure in your act,
should it be at the expense of losing ur self in 1 piece?
I say the truth now as a fact
of which u were shpposed to know better at least.
Now u just a bone
that even who you superseed alone
can now tender lessons of advice to you.
I know u are above me .......
And one day i know i will tell u this story
so that you alone will understand that I Brain
was always there for you even when u had fun
but now you are so fat gone with the pleasures of the mind.
So now if u dont mind
am here to take my leave
since am a thought u almost decived.
hmmmmm... One advice find urself,
and when u do pray u have not enslaved urself.
This is a goodbye from brains who u thought
was not brave enough.

Reviews

[h d e rushin]

first, this is the style of poem I enjoy (but I am a student of poetry and enjoy all of it), that
breathless, unabashed un-secret story telling. And any good love poem (which this is)
is also a goodbye poem in disguise. And for those who don't understand, this is the shape
of 2015 poetry: an ambiguous beginning, the tormented exposition, then the ending
bravery to say, "I've had enough".

it got a little preachy at the end, and no good listener wants to be preached to. But
I love it....

dana

[leow]

tanks a lot u remarks has been wonderful and an inspiration...@dana