Feeling not right

Feeling not right

A Story by Leo
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About a place that just did not seem real.

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                     The town seemed like one out of so many that Tommy had gone though. There was just something about this town that he just did not like. It was a feeling that he had one time before, that was a town that had killed out siders. There was just something that he could not put his figure on about this place, there was one thing that the people  were just strange . It was just as they had no emotions they walked around in what looked like a fog. The one thought was there someone that had control over these people. Tommy knew that could happen and he had seen it that it was the water the people had been drinking. The one thing that all the towns folk Tommy found out they did drink was beer. It was something that Tommy should of known for there was the large plant that was at the edge of town. What Tommy had found out was that most of the people of the town  worked there. It was the one thing that Keep the town from going away.


                 So Tommy went and got a job there to see what was going on. He started things seemed normal at first thing  got stranger . There was a break and everyone was drinking the beer did not seem right, the color was more of a black color. Tommy figured out how to look like he was drinking the beer but in fact he was not. It was a tube in his face that no one saw that he could get a sample . There as he went back to the hotel he sent it to a friend that could tell him what that was in the beer. A few days later he was told by his friends that it was a power use to control people. There was no real name for it but that it had power over people, that the owner  must of been using voodoo on these people to know how to use this  stuff. Tommy found out that he would have to destroy this stuff, and he would have to deal with the one that is doing all of this. Tommy did not like to deal with things like this but he knew that he had to for the sake of the town.


                     So that was what he did he went to the boss and told him what he had know what he was doing. There was something that came over him. That he went after Tommy with a knife and they fought , the Tommy got the upper hand and killed the boss. That was when he found all of the papers on what he was doing, he made sure all those that worked there knew. They changed the way things were done and the town seemed not to be under such a fog. It was one town that was back to normal but what about the next one what was waiting there for Tommy.

© 2014 Leo


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