my sister

its about my sister.

MY SISTER

My sister is an average person.

She gets good grades in school,

She makes me smile when I'm upset,

Sometimes she makes me want to rip my hair out.

but everybody has someone like that in their life,right.

She is everything to me.

She is very beautiful,intelligent,nice.

She has had some problems in the past.

But we got through them together.

She has never let me down on anything.

I love her with all of my heart.

She will always be with me.

As I will be with her.

We may fight at times but we always make up in the end.

kit cat this is for me and you.

My favorite person on the planet.

Reviews

[André-J-Franklin]

This is very sweet and believable. We can all connect to having the love hate relationship with a sibling

[No name]

this was very sweet, the reader can tell you really love your sister. Great write .

[PokemonFan#1]

Aww! How sweet! It was a very cute poem! Keep it up!

[Coyote Poetry]

A very positive and hopeful poem. You did very well with this poem. Good movement of words and a very good story. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[tekphobik]

It's like watching an episode of somethinglameIdon'tknow on the WB. In all honesty, I never understood sibling adoration like this, but that's just me (and yes, I do have siblings). I hope you two continue to get on well though and manage to maintain that raw love you have for each other.

omg! i really had tears comming down! and then i hugged you