cant write storyies for crap

cant writs stories for crap

This is a story but not like any story youve heard before. No. Its a story about a guy. A guy with a face. yes,he has a face that is very ugly. He wants to get it changed but he is so ugly,no doctor will even look at him or else their eyes will burn with the fire of five thousand suns. Some people say when he was born that he was hit by a bus after he came out of the thing we may not mention. so yeah thats what happend to the ugly person.

Author's Note

im very bad at writing storys.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The story had possibility. You need the simple logic of writing in all things. What, who, where, why and how in every story or poem. If you broke up the story. Added some history and detail. Could lead to a interesting story. Writing take practice. Read the reads a loud. You can hear the mistake in flow and in word. Good luck and I hope you keep trying. My first writing teacher told me I wrote like s**t. Today he read my poetry and tell me I have talent.
Coyote

[André-J-Franklin]

.... i support the idea of everyone can writer no matter what but you're an except. This suck really badly but maybe you had an off day or something. Maybe you really can't write not dissing your creatively which isn't really much here but you can do better then that or take course on here they might help you. You get a hundred though because you put it up their knowing it would be talked about that takes courage.

[PokemonFan#1]

I agree. Needs impruving.

[lennyrulez]

if i took the time i can write pretty good but i dont like to take that time.

I'm proud of you... but this sucks! sorry brother but you need to learn to write and i still love you but i need to teach you better