lies of a player

lies of a player

A Poem by thalii
"

some one made me feel worthless.

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Now i see that your all the same

now i know you run the same game

im "diffrent" thats what all the players say

bt wen u get caught u say baby i can change

this time not even you can deny

that you treated me like i wasnt worth your time

your now single and lookin everywhere

but the truth is i dont even really care

i guess i was another toy added to your collection

but baby you were far from being anything but perfection

dont play games when you know i can play betta

in order to beat me u gotta get your life together

i just cant belive i even waisted my time

it dosnt matter anymore cuz ur not in my life

but just remember........i dont make mistakes i date them

 

 

 

 

 

© 2009 thalii


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Wow I'm so sorry about what ever happened, hope Ur OK.sadface:( good write though portrays your feelings completely.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Spelling errors make the flow too choppy. The infamous language of the texter should be avoided when you are trying to send a message to the readers. Nice rhyming though.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Added on September 30, 2009
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thalii
thalii

allentown p.a, PA



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