The End of what i thought was love

when me and my boyfriend broke up

I feel like things between us are slowly fadeing

things are bound to change once we start aging

you might find someone new and fall out of love with me

i guess they were right we were never meant to be

its awkward enough just talking on the phone

and hurts more when i realize that your still gone

the pain is fierce will the hurt go away

and all the memories will they go or stay

should i just forget about you and what we had

im confused i dont want to continue being sad

everyday i dont see you io just want to cry

i was never ready to say goodbye

but already my feelings for you are going and it gets harder trying to picture your face

only time can tell if from my life youll be erased

Author's Note

i went through alot at first

Reviews

[Silvario]

this is a nicely written piece. good structure with a smooth fluid tempo. the writer conveys a feeling that is strongly felt by the reader.

i enjoyed this piece
well done indeed :)

[karmic]

This was really good, you are a great poet and i hope things get better.

[Donovan "Grey Wolf" Go..]

wow, thats love, why did ya'll break up