Cliff Hanger

Cliff Hanger

A Poem by Leizel Feolino
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The girl that broke my heart, left me to wonder what caused her to leave.

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She was the girl who kept to herself
her secrets and emotions enclosed as a sealed book
The day she opened up,
was the day I began to read her story
Each new chapter revealing more about herself
than she wanted to show,
But the girl who was known to keep to herself,
allowed this one reader to have a glimpse of who she really is
A glimpse that lasted for less than a year,
but it only took that long for the reader to fall in love with her story
That's when she closed herself up again,
ending her story,
leaving the reader to wonder.

© 2016 Leizel Feolino


Author's Note

Leizel Feolino
I have no idea what to do, except miss her whenever I stop thinking or doing something. I want this hurt to end.

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Gee
And that's love, can take you to dizzying heights, can leave you distraught in the gutter. Plenty more fish....... Enjoyed the read

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, its just, wow. This is brilliant. And I'm sorry to hear about her book closing. You will find peace again.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Leizel Feolino

8 Years Ago

Wow! Thank you, it hurts, but I know I will find peace eventually.

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Added on August 28, 2016
Last Updated on August 28, 2016
Tags: breakup, heartache, poem, writing, hurting, love, lost, sad, thoughts, girls, in love, broken

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Leizel Feolino
Leizel Feolino

Toronto, Canada



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finding solitude while being consumed by the heartache more..

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