THE LOST ROAD

I came back from a journey

travelled the mountains and valleys

crossed the oceans and rivers

and grateful when the sun is set

i can lay my back down to the ground

 

Now another course is set to walk

to the valleys where darkness reigns

to the path were no one dares to cross

to the oceans where no ship dares to sail

Now, where am I to go?

Reviews

[jennifer little]

good work great job keep it up

[xSamilynnx]

thats really good!!!!! i like it alot!!!! :D keep writing id love to read more x)

[reflectingus]

I love the contrast between the two stanzas. The first one makes life seem pleasant and simple, but with the second stanza, you also remind us of the other side of life, that we must face. Great job :)

[Distant horizons]

The path we travel is often the biggest surprise until the next part is revealed. Excellent words

[Chris Yip]

Short and sweet but with real issues about life's paths. Well written ,keep the good work going.

[Evelyn Storm]

This really represents the forks in the road and the crossroads we encounter in life. When you overcome one obstacle another arises but you meet them all with persistance. I love your poems because they are so true to life.

[Rae Elizabeth]

Beautiful. Wonderful imagery. Amazing. :)