RAIN

RAIN

Rain's pouring from the sky
a melody sighing from the past
echoing each memories
of how yesterday was spent

of love we both shared
laughters that filled our hearts
making each day a treasure
for tomorrow to cherish

so many rain has gone
and the boy has gone
so i let the rain to wash him away
but let the memories here to stay

Reviews

[Strider Marcus Jones]

Like the theme and rhythm. Excellent poem. 100/100

[Emily B]

keep the memories, they will be a bright spot on a future rainy day

[Donald Cole]

hmmmm. a fond sentiment of memory lane.....I went there the other day, for a minute......the past becomes a reference point of something i learned........
I love the simplicity in this.....I need that in my days
Don

[Circe]

really heartfelt, like a melancholic song... concise, rhythmic flow.. beautiful to read.

[The Doctor]

Very emotional. But memories are what keep us going. Keep us striving for a better future, better and/or new experiences. So chin up, it will get better.

[Pax]

memories keeps us at bay
makes us to stay the same.
wonderful write.

[Michael G.]

Lovely, sad, and a quiet feel to this poem. I liked this.