Brave

Brave

A Poem by Annabeth
"

All are brave,some just break.

"
She thought she was brave
She thought she was strong
When tornadoes hit all went wrong

Her crying swept across the land
As tornadoes hit the sand
When twisters hit her house
All went wrong

When the twisters hit the house
It was gone,in just seconds,
Swept down to the ground

She thought she was brave 
She thought she was strong 
When she saw her family on the ground
She just cried,all felt lost

Her family dead
The twisters moving,sand blowing
Bits of debris going and going

She thought she was brave
She thought she was strong
No she was not
Very far from it

With her family dead 
She just lay there
Sobbing and weeping as the wind took her

It took her to Heaven
Twister gone,
She saw her family
Happy with song

© 2013 Annabeth


Author's Note

Annabeth
For all those who died in the tornadoes in OK

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Thank you for the great piece.
I adore your rhyme, emotion and sense of honor to the dead families.


Posted 11 Years Ago


zainul

11 Years Ago

Wish great success of you and your team.
Annabeth

11 Years Ago

Thanks!:)
zainul

11 Years Ago

Welcome !:)
This is such a well-penned tribute to those who perished in OK. You have portrayed their ordeal, and the emotion, beautifully.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Annabeth

11 Years Ago

Thank you.I liked writing this piece but it made me really sad for those who have died.
it put acrss what happnd b'fully! its has been written fabulously thumbs up! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Annabeth

11 Years Ago

Thank you! What has happened has devastated all of America.
Zelle

11 Years Ago

it certainly has... lets hope it doesn't happen in future.people who have suffered recover ASAP and .. read more
Annabeth

11 Years Ago

Lets hope.They've had tornadoes twice in a row now.
amazing i loved it

Posted 11 Years Ago


Annabeth

11 Years Ago

Thanks

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