Please Stay

About my best friend who is leaving my state today

Please stay,

With you away

I will cry

My life will change,

it will be different

Please stay

I cannot say

How much I'll miss you

I truly know

That you must go

But now is not the time

Please stay

For as I write this

I will cry

Please stay

You're my friend

I will miss you

Please stay

My life will change

it will be different

You are my friend

My best ever

Reviews

[Paul]

Beautifully written poem! I totally enjoyed the read. I can totally relate to this write. Well done!

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice use of repetition. Sometime we must request people to stay. Because when some people leave. They are gone forever. I like the desire and the positive ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Annabeth]

I want more than anything for her to stay but I know that she must go with her family. I want it so much so I decided that telling her that she is my best friend.

[Coyote Poetry]

Internet, phones and vacations. No reasons to lose a friend. Keep in touch. I travel the world from 1977-1980. I wish I kept in contact with the many good people who were kind to me. No internet then. Letters were primary source of contact.

[Annabeth]

i'll be texting but sending letters will be the main way to keep in touch. Personally I like letters better because texts are usually rushed.I'll be visiting her as well. My mom is the same way,she's lived all over and wants to keep in touch but can't really.

[Rahul]

Please stay
For as I write this
I will cry...you left here a well penned piece...again you did a great job here. nice work and every word showed the depth of your words of your writing.

[Annabeth]

Thank you! You always do great as well!

[Sami Khalil]

I can feel the sadness of separation in this good poem ...:)

[Jack...]

Missing someone always leaves us feeling helpless. Your poem conveys these feelings very nicely. Very well done.

Good luck getting to Rio.

[Annabeth]

It leaves all of my friends helpless,we all miss her so much.

Thanks!