Dream

I do have a dream.These dreams are true and real. It shows how much swimming means to me. I swim because I choose to and because I love it.

I have a dream.
A dream to be.
The best I can be.
I have a dream.
To go to Rio.
I have a dream.
To get gold.
My dreams are set high.
I have a dream.
A dream to win.
I have a dream to be the best that I can be.
I have a dream.
A dream to be.
The best that I can be.
I dream and wish upon a star
To be.
To get my dream.

Reviews

[VeCeWallace]

This is a very nice peace. The emotion you set in here along with the wish makes it all more valuable. Poems come from the heart. Some from our personalities. This sounded as it was from both. I'd like to see more. This was inspiring and very uplifting. Don't let your dreams die..... Don't let them fade....... And don't let any of your talents get lost in the dirt, because sometimes it's harder to find them once more than it is to reapply them to our advantages.

[Annabeth]

Thank you! I love story writing but this poem was really interesting to write. I think that Dream is a poem for all swimmers or people who have a goal. Dream was a poem to show that anything is possible. I would like to add more soon!

[VeCeWallace]

It's good to inspire others. Usually many people such as myself have very low self faith. Sad but true. I'm working on it though.

[Annabeth]

I like to know that! For me self faith is important and I like to know that! Keep on working!

[Sami Khalil]

"I have a dream.
To go to Rio.
I have a dream.
To get gold.
My dreams are set high."
Nothing wrong with setting high goals and dreaming big dreams...Well penned...:)

[Annabeth]

I think that dreams like this are very important.Setting goals high are also important.

[Sami Khalil]

True...You are welcome...:)

[Coyote Poetry]

A strong and powerful poem. I like the hope and the desire in the poem. I hope to see you in Rio. Sports give us reason to improve and enjoy life and travel. Take a lot of pictures. They would be interesting and very valuable later in your life. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Annabeth]

I have lots of faith in myself,swimming means a lot to me and I travel every weekend. I will of course take a lot of pictures. To win gold would probably make me cry,i've been training harder than ever these days.Thank you for the excellent review

[Caradoc]

Nice poem.

I hope you don't get offended, but this reminded me a great deal of the "Pokemon" theme song; specifically, the opening lines. Put a smile on my face.

Good luck with your dream.

-Caradoc

[Annabeth]

Thanks!

Gosh no!Now that I think of it it kinda does remind me too!

Thank you.

[Caradoc]

You're welcome.

[Jack...]

Like I said before, I hope you get to Rio. I hope your dream comes true. You will need to let us know if you do succeed at this quest so we can all watch and root for you. Very nice poem, keep dreaming my friend, for without our dreams we have nothing.

[Annabeth]

;) I hope my dream comes true as well. Don't worry,i'll be telling everyone I see!

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Good read and write.

[Rahul]

A Great rhyming poem...:)
nicely penned

[Annabeth]

Thanks!