Crying Skin

Crying Skin

A Poem by Leesah

I swim through
broken glass
treading and making waves
of thickening mirk
your hand stirs
the pot I am in
as there is nothing
to soothe my crying skin

© 2008 Leesah


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This is an amazing piece of work. i have just re-read it after a few months away, and it's till as powerful as ever, even better for being short and to the point.
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Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Reading this I felt pain and abandonment, I wish I could have reached out to pull you free. A writing of great emotion. Excellent!!!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, this was very powerful indeed!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 20, 2008

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Leesah
Leesah

roseville, CA



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