It's ....

it's running .... it's running ...

it's running like the water 

as calm & as soothing as the midnight moon waves

yet as ferocious as a lion's roar

it comprehends emotion, intellect, humility 

though at times it itself cannot comprehend the power of it's own

it's shifting ...

it's running ... it's running ...

it's beauty ... it's beauty ...

the way it contorts & conforms 

changing 

it creates ... manifest ...

it heals, it hurts, it's soft, gentle 

makes you feel good

though indulging in it can be sin 

it falls into the wrong hands, gets caressed by the right 

it's art ..

confused .. it bleeds 

it's beauty ...

it's ..

it's a dream catcher, soul snatcher, succubus 

catchy, flashy, wordy, loving, learning

destroying, building

what is this feeling ?!...

it ... it is a she

she 

is woman

Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I don't know if I agree with all of it, but some of this is true.
I like the story line to this piece, very creative, describing a woman.
How did you think, to write something like this? very cleaver.
Anyway I loved the emotion in it, the meaning, the way it was set out.
I liked the whole poem, great write :)

[leenanicole]

lol thanks again ... i was honestly just on the train home & it came to me ... the concept was clear at first, but once i started writing it ... it came as i went along. thanks again for the review, peace.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Anytime :)