Those Eyes

Behind her smiling eyes

there is history

there is mystery

there are cupid darts

stock within

dying butterflies

spreading their withered wings

planted trees

with flourishing leaves

little birdies

learning their first melody

behind her smiling eyes

there is hidden love

desperate love

growing love

learning love

Behind her smiling eyes

There is a story

Reviews

[Matching Socks]

Fabulous. The eyes are the gateways and everyone has a story, regardless of what you see on the surface.

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Thank you for reading and commenting and yes your're quite accurate

[BlueDreams]

Wow that's a magnificent piece of poetry :) Great flow of imagery is here :)

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Thank you!

[BlueDreams]

My pleasure anytime :) :)

[btopasna]

I love this, so simple yet so meaningful. Thank you for sharing :)

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Thank you for your review

[writing mojo]

a pupil to such gazing worded imagery leaves the cortex of my brain binging for more of your perceptive stuff..great piece

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Thank you!

[Aehr]

To be perfectly honest, I envy you when it comes to this poem in the best way possible. I wish I was the one who had penned it down! Its just that beautiful.

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

It's never to late go write one :-) Thank you for those kind words

[Aehr]

You are most welcome. :)

[Sami Khalil]

You have summed it up marvelously about eyes...Bravo...............

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Thank you!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)................

[Neville]

Yes indeed, a very nice literary observation - A well stated poetic truism for all of us to share...

All Good Things,

Neville

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Thank you!

[Lover Of Words]

Just beautiful beyond words

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Thank you!

[Speak Out]

Sometimes a person’s eyes tells it all, cleverly penned thanks for sharing

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Thank you!