Thank you!

Lonely was I, confused was my soul,

fate brought me to someone,

someone, who helped made me whole.

Teaching me things, I never knew they knew,

every phrase, every gesture, made me renew.

That was a moment, a moment kept in my heart,

good things don’t last forever,

now I must walk bravely…

holding that missing part…

Reviews

[Ghost]

So heat felt... Reading your words reminds me of the one i love but am not with and I hope she is ok.. Keep writing the beautiful words of your heart.. Thanks for sharing.

[onceloved]

Your heart and soul painting your feelings so beautifully. :) Larry

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Thank you Larry

[Glen Yumang Manese]

has a tone the lines...as one goes about this read...
the self expressive voice guides us along your thoughts...
the giving back with the words within this write...

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Thanks Glen for reading and commenting

[Glen Yumang Manese]

you're welcome...

[Sami Khalil]

Thank you for holding the missing part of life and penning your emotions...Bravo.................

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Thank you for reading and commenting

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).....................

[btopasna]

This is very emotional on the writer's part. It's also something that many people can relate to, myself included. Brilliant poem. :)

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Thank you for those kind words, and yes, it's an emotional piece I'm glad you yourself can relate

[Lover Of Words]

Very well written beautiful job

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Thank you!

[~Poetik Bliss~]

Really nice poem :) thanks for sharing

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Thanks J, I'm glad you like it

[Jack...]

Very nicely done my friend. This was a beautifl little piece of love and friendship and missing both.

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Thanks Jack yes it is an expression of gratitude, I'm glad you like it