Living the Unpredictable

Life is a lesson we all must learn.

Today the sun may shine on us

and tomorrow the rain drops may burn.

Life has its questions for the wise

and unwise to see.

Most times they both don’t

always solve their mystery.

One can’t endure this life,

unless they love when there is hate.

One can’t grow stronger,

unless they appreciate.

One can’t move on, until

they forgive the unforgotten.

One must enjoy this life fully, until

it’s time, for their precious bones 

to decay and become rotten.

Reviews

[Nic Murray]

theres both a beauty and cruelty to the reality of what life is and how unpredictable and yet predictable it can be and you've demonstrated that so realistically and truthfully that it was so easy to relate to the poem. Really enjoyed this!

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

I've learned that the hard way,thank you I'm glad you enjoyed this piece

[Mockingbird]

the ending comes as a surprise. it becomes morbid without any segue. lessons to be pondered upon. great poem.

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Thank you Mockingbird, I'm glad you liked it.

[Cassie]

This is a good message, really inspiring. Thank you for sharing

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Thank you for your time and review

[It's Me, The Miracle]

I am inspired!!!! This is where the success of literature lies....BUT WHY THIS IMAGE? Could have find a better match I feel...

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Thank you for your review I thought about changing the picture,now seeing that you mentioned it I think I will

[It's Me, The Miracle]

hm....thanks a lot...in fact, I was hesitant to mention it as words are the potential hurt causing agents.....but finally I decided to mention it as I could find a very understanding and friendly person in each of your poems.....

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Never hesitate to tell be anything,thanks again!

[It's Me, The Miracle]

sure.... i will....

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Inspirational write with this one... the way you convey the verse... with the repeating lines and get the reader to key in on the subject matter...

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Thanks again Glen

[CreativeCookie]

So true, and a great piece! Keep it up!
Love,
CreativeCookie

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Thank you CreativeCookie, oh how I love typing your name ^_^

[Jack...]

Definitely some truth in your words my friend. Very nice.

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Thank you for reading and commenting

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write...Thank you for sharing...:)

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Thank you again Sami

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[1]

Love the quick hitting emotion and melodic tune of this piece! Life! Write on!

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Thank you!