A Woman's Worth

Twenty toes in a house where no one knows

makes a wrong moment seem so right  

His awkward silence and her tempting body

takes reality out of sight

She had fought the fight to keep her secret prize

for the man who makes her Cinderella dream come true

And in knowing this he assures her, that this is what

he wants to do

Bit by bit he reveals , the quality his eyes were

longing for

Bit by Bit she allows him, whilst he keeps

her nerves under a relaxing score

Her body shyly awaits him, on the bed where

his fantasy meets

He gets on top of her, after he covers

 her awaiting treat

He places his warmth inside her, ensuring

 her that everything would be alright

She moans while she feels the sweetest pain

without feeling any fright  

His hands massages through her long wavy hair

as she follows his double stroke rhythm

She kisses his lips perpetually, hoping that

 her heart will always be with him

Their groaning increases, whilst they melt

in each others arms

She gets worried as she sees a red color,

knowing that he didn't do her any harm

I smile, as I look

at our left fingers today

I guess he did fulfill his promise?

And in my dairy

this special moment will always stay

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Jack...]

This was melodically and dream like in it feel. Very sensual and pleasing to read and the ending finished it off nicely. Very hot, very cool, very good.

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Thank you I'm happy to know this

[Glen Yumang Manese]

A sensual take at this verse... the slowness... the abrupt and the climax of it...all... the write gets intimate and the rest just speaks for itself... and you give the reader a sense of something even more after the event and wrote down the experience in a diary...

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Thanks again Glen for your time and review