The Lioness favorite meat

She swirls around her King as he holds her favorite treat.

The fierceness in her eyes makes him aware of his defeat.

 

He steps away from her, increasing her desirability.

Her body water grows, so she gravitates towards him anxiously.

 

Being the first ruler, he allows her to take him down.

She gets on top of him, wearing only her golden crown.

 

He rubs against her fur, as her inner thighs consume her desired meat.

He wishes to interchange, but he knows his LEO never leaves the heat.

Reviews

[writing mojo]

Ha Ha I figured you are a LEO...it's shown with the bite of your zodiac choice words, a trajectories of a star gazer, yet more in tune with what inflames on the grounded...great piece... watch out for this queen of denial posing as king of the jungle...

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Hahaha I hear you loud and clear,thanks for the review

[Neon]

Totally an awesome work. I really enjoyed reading this piece.. it's a bit funny, lovely, meaningful, sensible, very truthful and beautiful ... Nice work dear, Fana. Your cool.

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Hey I'm cool whoo hoo! :-D Thanks Neon I'm glad you enjoyed it

[Speak Out]

Hahaha smoking,bad kitty! I enjoyed this piece

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

I'm glad you like it,thanks for the review :-)

[Speak Out]

Roar.......my pleasure

[Muse]

Roar this was hot. lol I guess when it comes to carnal desires we woman are no better than a cat in heat?

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Lol I guess we are,thanks for the review

[Cassie]

Thank you for sharing this, I enjoyed it.

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. Must I mention I saw that you’re from Africa? Words can’t explain the way your continent fascinates me, the rhythm of the drums, the nature in the wild and of course your native Language. I think I fell in love, the day I saw Rafiki the monkey on Lion King :D, even greater when I saw the movie Sarafina who inspired me growing up as a teenager. Maybe I’ll see you when I visit your beautiful continent one of these fine days.

[DJ]

I enjoyed this piece. I love how your poetry seems to have a lot of underline feminism in them. Very powerful work. Sensual and pleasant to read. Thank you :)

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Thanks again Cairo

[DJ]

Leo's certainly are powerful and independent :) Well written :)

[1]

Very sensual piece! Ahhhhhh, the weakness of holding the meat..... A shared dilemma! Nice pen!

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Thank you for reading and commenting

[Tom]

Very thoughtful and even humourous to a point which makes it even better !

Really excellent poem, enjoyed it so much !

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Thanks Tom

[Darkblushedink]

Amazing! Although i am no expert but it is high on feminism...........that is exactly why i love it more!!!!!
To tell the truth it shows sort of a sweeter side to men, because of this there is a higher increased charm in the poem!

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Hahaha thank you for your nice words

[Darkblushedink]

oh no problem! AND VERY WELCOME! ^.^

[Forest Green]

Requires a second look...very original.

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Thank you! Look forward to reading some of your work in return