Ever Wondered

She'll sit in an office rocking from side to side,

whenever she gets an irritable feeling inside.

 

                Figures would make her mind turn cold,            

Whereas an essay would add food to her soul.

 

Some may use the word naive to describe her,

As she willfully acts in a childish behavior.

Yet still laughs and screams may not always be heard,

As she sometimes elegantly utters extravagant words.

 

A house full of people won't always excite her,

As her spouse is all she may need to entice her.

 

Her imagination is beyond her control,

She’ll fantasize about stories yet to unfold.

 

She's as sensitive as a moth to the light,

She can easily tell when something isn't right.

 

Classical music makes her quiver,

A Dramatic movie would her mind trigger.

 

She's creative

She's persuasive

She's a weirdo

She doesn't care though

Is it because she's a woman of the Arts?

    

                           

    

Reviews

[CreativeCookie]

Oh my goodness! When I read this I kept feeling that it sounds familiar...but then I realized that I might as well be looking in a mirror! I love it!
Love,
CreativeCookie

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Hahaha our minds are probably related,glad you liked it

[Tom]

'As sensitive as a moth to light' is a marvellous metaphoric line, an intriguing write about an intriguing person!

I wonder if this was an autobiography ?

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Thank you,and yes it's my own little autobiography ^_^

[Tom]

Intriguing !

[Glen Yumang Manese]

We all have a bit of bipolar is all of us... as artist... if they do not admit to it... then they are not artist... they are of a different kind altogether... Now I see your truer form... You're a combustible... never know when you're going to explode... or not...

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Combustible! Hahaha love it! Thanks again Glen

[Justaguy]

There is always something to be said for letting yuor mind wander to a fantasy world once in a while. Loved it!

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Thank you!

[Cherrie Palmer]

I can relate to this poem on quite a few levels, I love classical music I find it to be a blank canvas in my mind, the only thing that works better than that is the sound of the wind. I enjoyed reading this and thou I would never fit in with the true Art world I am definitely a 1st cousin.

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Hahaha 1st cousin I love the relation.Thanks for reading and commenting!

[Cherrie Palmer]

:) you are very welcome

[SyberRose]

Beautifully said...everyone should appreciate the arts...Enjoyed Rose:)

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

^_^ I agree, thank you

[Neville]

It flowed well. All Good Things, N

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Thank you Man of the Arts :-)

[Neville]

No problem but please, please, please take me down from this pedestal - All Good Things, N

[The Nude Writer]

Wow! Really cool poem! It is so true.. the artistically minded tend to be on another level of existence :) Sometimes my fantasy world is more real than my real world. Love what you have written :)

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Thank you

[Chris]

I read it through... the last stanza was strong.

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Thanks for reading