martyrdom

martyrdom

A Poem by pressedflowers

don't make this any harder than it needs to be 
someday you'll wake up - someday, you'll see 
all the time you wasted feeling sorry 
the sand piled high before it gets washed away 
the moments you wasted balancing self pity 
with grandiose delusions 
moments wasted trying to be simultaneously 
seen and unseen 

for the love of god stop trying 
just be.

© 2024 pressedflowers


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Wow I love this so so much, the line "moments wasted trying to be simultaneously seen
and unseen" captures so many deep deep feelings beautifully. I love this concept and I love how loaded yet concise it is, bravo :))

Posted 8 Months Ago


pressedflowers

8 Months Ago

Thank you so much!

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