Sometimes life just doesn’t give you a break

Just thoughts.. rantings of my mind

Day on Day you you see people pass on the wave of success

Leaving you behind with your failure

Laughing at you in their success parties

On how you couldn’t make it.

They say you never had it in you

They knew it before, and like that

Sometimes life just doesn’t give you a break

 

You sit and wonder, what went wrong

Why your efforts never pay

Success eludes you and failure sticks to you

But atleast it loves you and stays by you

All you love and care deserts you and

Sometimes life just still doesn’t give you a break

 

Friends turn into acquaintance and then strangers as they sucessed

Not wishing to be associated with you

Ignoring you seems to be right choice

Not wishing to rub your bad luck on to them

Sometimes life just doesn’t give you a break

 

Your alone with your shattered dreams

Wishing things would be otherwise

Replaying all the things you did in the past

Worrying about the opportunities gone by and

Sometimes life just doesn’t give you a break

Reviews

[Faceless Poet]

Life tires me down
sometimes the crowd turns me into a clown

the jokes on me, but blame it to irony
taking a break is good for a fresh air
in the ocean depths i stare
for what's beyond relaxes me
and my viens are as free
thinking of the brand new day to come...

- faceless being...

[sameer]

Very very nicely written.. I liked what you wrote better then mine

[Faceless Poet]

You are more than welcome, I wrote that in response to this piece, it is indeed quite relatable, perhaps we all go through this phase of life, i or we are just hoping for that brand new day up ahead. be positive :)