failure

Alone and sad I wait by the sea side

Seeing the ships of success ride by

I wait and wait for failure to die

And the tide to take me to the other side

 

People I knew are up in the sky

Ladder of success has taken them so high

All my friends have long gone by

Its just you and me

Failure, I am glad at least your on my side.

 

Although sometimes I wish for you to do die

And want success to be my bride

You’re the one I know who will be buried by my side

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[Ifreakinloveyou]

I really like your use of metaphors especially the ships, because i'm partlial to nautical themes; for the record this one isn't a failure :)