i love you

this is my first try so dont laugh and this goes out a very special person in my life

i love you
I never really knew you
you were just another freind, but when I
got to know you, I let my heart unbend.
I couldn't help past memories that would only make me cry, . So I've fallen in love with you, and I'll never let you go, i love you more than anyone, I just had to let you know. And if you ever wonder why, I don't know what I'll say, but I'll never stop loving you each and every day. My feelings for you will never change, just know my feelings are true. Just remember one thing..........
i love you!!!!!

Author's Note

its my first try tell me how u like it and mabey ill tell who its for

Reviews

[BELLA]

that was rally sweet

[♥(heatherawesome..]

this is really awesom and who ever is this for will love you 2 and who is it 4 any ways love the poem and this is better than a few of my poems and this is really awesome

[Scrawl]

i think this does a good job to beg the good side of the emothion something i could never do because my poems about love are always dark and i believe that a lot of people can relate to this and you not saying who it is makes it even better to relate so good job

[Noctis Lionward]

good job grandma!

[Matthew J. Price]

better than my first

[Dakota]

I'd say leave it as is but that's just my opinion. I feel that more emotion and energy go into a first draft. Great piece! Keep writing!

[chaotic katie]

this is awesome darren your a great writer and the poem is soo sweet whoever it is written for will love it great job :)