Music

A poem about music.

He lives in me,

Altering my emotions,

Demanding someone to listen.

I can’t stop,

Addicted.

He lives in me,

Begging for my ears,

Feeding on my emotions.

He is dangerous,

With those controlling notes.

My emotions become mutable.

Author's Note

Let me know what you think, pretty please.

Reviews

[Alyssa Case]

I really like this.There's real fear in it, but also you can tell "you" love it, the addiction, kind of like a junkie. It's really deep in the way a pool of water can look shallow, but then you step in and it has no bottom. The voice is really soothing as well.

[Horizons]

Emotions keep us alive, happiness make us joyous and the beauty of love always brings some peace in our life ... this poem's well structured and the words're seemed lyrical. I'm even still screaming these lines in my mind and i just loved this poem. Music's what makes us happier and relax... whenever we feel not good, listening to music always makes us up and make our mood good and joyous. It's simple, realistic, mutable of course, beautifully written right from the heart and your scent's spreading the scent of your heart through this piece in the suite of words. Well done, brilliant job!

[leahanne]

Music sort of a remote to my emotions. Not not does it lift my spirits when I am down but sometimes, I listen to music just to experience sadness or anger. Thank you so much for taking the time to comment on my piece :) this lovely review made me smile so big. I am sure people are looking at me weird for smiling at my phone.

[Horizons]

Lol ;)
Me too love music much but not to experience my sadness and anger but get rid off my sadness and anger. I've got one more thing that Music... a good and a music that we love to always makes us smiley and refresh to start off the day in a new way... and yes, Music's really a greatest thing ever in this world that can make a smile, make some freshness on anyone's face... cos, music's scent's scented onself and music's everywhere.. ..in trees, in animals, in birds, in humans, in air, in clouds, in rain, in storms, in nature, in env., on surrounds and at an ever place music's existed... it's sustained in nature to make every living relax...

Well, don't worry, people always look at weirdness cos, weirdness makes them smiley and your beautiful lovely smile will make them smiley too... afterall people look at the beautiful things and beautiful things're always weird ... lol (a bit) ... llol. Don't worry, just keep smile with your beauty and spread your scent in the air so that every living could stay alive with your cold breathe ;)

[Sarrow]

I liked this. The meaning comes across easily but in a strong way and I liked how it took the side of music being a controlling force.

[leahanne]

Thank you thank you :) This is actually my first time messing around with poetry. I used to just write short stories but I decided to play around with words on this one.

[Lyncoln (Lync) Pear]

You were able to achieve short, deep meaningful post that can be so relatable to anyone that is a music lover. Amazing job!

[leahanne]

Thank you so so much! :) You have no idea how much that means to me!