you are

my own work.

you are cold,

like that bus ride i took to chicago.

you are sad,

like that song they played on the radio last monday.

you made me smile though.

i saw that coldness in your sharp eye,

i saw that sadness in your walk. 

it made me smile, 

the fact that you are where

you dropped me off. 

Reviews

[Mina]

This is beautiful and has a sway to it that makes me wanna hear more, if you turned it into a song it'd be listened to all night long

[Anonymous -]

Karma is a big as they say , I liked it !

[W R Stowe]

touching payback sounds like to me nicely done,bet you would like Hit The Road posted last night