The Girl

The Girl

A Poem by melbear

So lost

In a world so crule

Her heart being tost

From fool to fool

 

Her laugh

Now tears

Her hopes

Now fears

 

Through spleting seams

And so much sound

We lose he screams

With all those around

 

She's torn

When forbiden

To travil on

The road she's hidden

 

Like a dove

In the dawn

Their love

Now far done

© 2011 melbear


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powerful & emotional read

Posted 13 Years Ago
Not bad =) I like the emotion that is infused in the poem. Keep writing.

Posted 13 Years Ago

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 Added on May 28, 2011
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melbear
melbear

orting, WA



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Hello, my name is Melissa Renne Duncan, im 16 but will be 17 on august 15th.... i was born in 1994.... i live in orting WA with my mom and dad my 2 brothers and 3 sisters. im the oldest of 6.. ive mo.. more..

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