clock

another haiku ofmine,,

I try to sleep but,
my clock is ticking on thoughts
of us together

Reviews

[SyberRose]

You did a very good job with syllable count...although this a senryu...not a haiku..haiku is about nature.
I will look forward to reading a haiku about nature from you...Rose:)

[Reggie Sapphire]

thankyou for your advice :)) :3