Invisibility

Another haiku that sprang up in my head, i made this to make myself feel better.

People stare at me
Like i aint there, but i'm here
Breathing, existing.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[xx]

Simply good! I find Haiku's really hard, but you execute them well!!

[Reggie Sapphire]

thankyou flora!

[Allison Lyndel]

Well done :) I really enjoyed your haiku. I myself haven't written one in a long time but you handled it well. Its easy to understand and gripped my heart. I hope things become easier for you Reggie Sapphire.

[Reggie Sapphire]

thank you for your time and review !

[DJ]

Yes you are breathing and existing, another well written haiku. I know what it feels like to be passed over, when people look through you. Nicely written. Simple and good message. Thank you for sharing another moment with us in your writing :)

[Reggie Sapphire]

thank you, very much

[Wolfwind]

To be able to recognize our own breath, even though those in the room and streets may not, is a powerful ability. This poem inspires us all to look deep within and find our spark, and know that no one else can extinguish it's grace and beauty.

Great Ink!
Aaron - Wolfwind

[Reggie Sapphire]

thank you !!

[Ezekiel Silver]

A very thoughtful poem with incredible insight. Personally though, I think you shouldn't have made it a haiku. This piece should have been longer, that really is the only problem I see with it. Other than that, fantastic!

[Reggie Sapphire]

thank you !