Luxury

We had an assignment in creative writing where we had to cut out words out of magazines then make a poem out of the words. This is what I came up with. Enjoy

Timeless underwater night,

overwhelming perfection,

the new moon,

a diamond,

after night,

This is breaking ground,

a call of a drum beat,

strutting sounds,

Fanned after the brink

 

breeding male of today,

characteristic sense,

After that goodness of tomorrow,

Dance all night after the normal have,

difference by chain,

Forever the Ring,

After Luxury.

Reviews

[Laughing-Bear]

My Dear Writing Friend,
I thought your poem and its making was a novel approach to writing, I would of never have dreamed up such a fun exercise, Note, Alaskan mushers have little ability to think outside the box as dogs have overtaken all commonsense.
I wondered did you have more words that could have been used or were you limited to just the ones used in your poem, please do tell. Any way it was a fun read that I appreciate you sharing.

Blessings, Laughing-Bear

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

You did great work of this.

[Jake Staffeld]

It might be nonsense, but it flows really well. Good job, this is a great poem.

[Rayne Stanton]

yeya!!! i love nonsense poems :D