Closing In

In this room,

This awful day,

I close my eyes,

And start to pray,

From my aching heart,

I spill my fears,

And soon there after,

I spill my tears,

Are you there,

Aware of this scare,

Or are you asleep,

Listening silently as I weep?

Can you you hear me,

Way up there?

While I sit alone,

In this cold, dark lair,

Please whisper to me in my head,

Before they find me,

Cold in my bed.

Reviews

[cfix]

This is a very well written write, so full of feeling.

[Jake Staffeld]

Pretty good Layla. A little depressing, but that does seem to be your style.

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

If only I could explain how well I relate to this, great poem.

[Peter Joseph Swanson]

Scary! Cool poem!

[Shane Williams]

very nice!

[Right Wing Constervativ..]

very well written