Lost Rose

Wrote this five minutes ago in Journalism

This lost rose,

Once beautiful and graceful,

Wilts slowly away,

The cruel frost of Winter,

Draws the beauty slowly,

Out of silk, red petals,

A green leaf falls sadly,

From the once strong stem,

Left of this once beautiful rose,

The thorns of this dying grace,

Live to prick another stray finger,

Of an unknowing heart.

Reviews

[Daydreamer54]

The thorns of this dying grace,
I like this line. i can just picture the rose dying, it'ls like its in slow motion. Awesome write! ^^

[Dai Edenburough]

Ooh, well written! Good format, and great use of words! Great way of describing the death of the rose in winter. The last three lines are mine favorites.

[Jake Staffeld]

I like this one. The formatting is nice.