Death

senyru

Please do not cry dear,

Death is but the end of a

Terrible show

Reviews

[Eddie Phillips]

A light at the end. I like the reassuring beauty of this senyru

[Ilikepie]

darkly beautiful

[Zap-the-awesome]

I disagree with the message ( for it seems to me to slide to life as a terrible thing)
But I love the quip. Bravo? Yes.

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

This is great, I think celebration and humour is the best way to face death.

[five_stars]

Well senyru or haiku, This is wonderful

[Another_Lost_soul]

A little dark for you...but still f-ing Amazing!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

certainly one way to look at it...

this is more senyru actually than haiku....but is really a good, thoughtful piece...

the way this life has become, we do hope something better is in the sequel.

[Pretty_as_a_Poet]

yeah, but there isn't an option for senyru in the genre's.....so I hoped that the reader wouldn't be able to tell the difference! I'm glad someone knows their poetry :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes you are right, there isn't ....so it has to go under haiku....i keep forgetting that...

[Pretty_as_a_Poet]

wait...I just checked and there is....I should be more observant....I had totally over looked it thinking that this site wouldn't have it. most sites don't.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

they must have added it...cause i was going to put up a senyru and remember not seeing a spot for it...or i just missed it..thanks for letting me know...

and you are right also because i have never seen a site that has a spot for them.

[Alina-Sofia]

nice, nice

[written in blood]

very nice, I like to think of death as a rebirth..