Tears from the sky

I wrote this a while back, during a rough patch of my life. I thought I would share it here, maybe someone can relate to it.

On my knees,

Kneeling on my cold, hard floor,

Sorting through the memories,

Of the month before,

Wondering what I ever did to you,

If there was something I could've said,

Because as my love for you grew,

Your love for me dwindled instead.

Author's Note

Please tell me if you see anything wrong with it! And i'd also reeeeaaallly apreciate constructive criticism (Just nothing too mean) Thanks :)