Waiting for summer

This is something a wrote while traveling about coming home in the summer.

Waiting for Summer,

For the warm bonfire nights,

With hundreds of glimmering fireflies.

 

Waiting for Summer,

For Paris in June,

Looking up from Marsielle at the glittering moon.

 

Waiting for Summer,

Hawaiian nights on the beach,

The sad, stressful world seeming so far out of reach.

 

Waiting for Summer,

For coming back to skies of blue,

In July, running in fields with you.

 

  

 

Author's Note

This is my first poem i wrote while on the website, and if you see any spelling or grammar problems at all please tell me! thank you :)

Reviews

[Patrick]

Hi, like the ideas here - you do know in all the verses you have the last two lines in rhyme but the first verse/stanza isn't? Just a thought but was enchanted by the simplicity of this :)

[Destinyxi]

Nicely written :) love the ending

[Distant horizons]

Beautiful, just beautiful.