Let it rain

Let it rain

A Poem by Lau Thiam Kok

Let it rain
Let it howl
Let we see each other no more.
 
Let it change our mind
Let it shift our love.
 
Let it flood
Let it destroy the place we know
Let me think of it
No more.

24.10.2004, 12:20 pm, Fri.

© 2008 Lau Thiam Kok


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This was good! I liked how all but one line started with Let it... That seemed to me to be very powerful. I really liked this.

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Lau Thiam Kok
Lau Thiam Kok

Budapest, VI., Hungary



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I have moved all my writing to my personal website. Please check them out at: https://lauthiamkok.net/poetic Born in Penang, Malaysia. Studied Bachelor of Applied Arts at University Malaysia Sar.. more..

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