I always choose you first

I always choose you first

A Poem by Lau Thiam Kok

I always choose you first
However you are in my life no more
I will still always choose (you)
The eyes that see me like you did
So that I will never stop
Seeing you.

I always choose you first
However we see each no more
I will still always choose (you)
The heart that knows me like you did
So that I will never stop
Knowing you.

I always choose you first
However we know each other no more
I will still always choose (you)
The voice that talks to me like you did
So that I will never stop, never stop
Hearing you.

© 2008 Lau Thiam Kok


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This makes me sad.. i like the lines :

The voice that talks to me like you did
So that I will never stop, never stop
Hearing you.

I like the repetition of never stop .. i like repetition in poetry..

This is well written .. i enjoyed it .

Chloe
xoxo

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This makes me sad.. i like the lines :

The voice that talks to me like you did
So that I will never stop, never stop
Hearing you.

I like the repetition of never stop .. i like repetition in poetry..

This is well written .. i enjoyed it .

Chloe
xoxo

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Lau Thiam Kok
Lau Thiam Kok

Budapest, VI., Hungary



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I have moved all my writing to my personal website. Please check them out at: https://lauthiamkok.net/poetic Born in Penang, Malaysia. Studied Bachelor of Applied Arts at University Malaysia Sar.. more..

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