I Am A Poem

I Am A Poem

A Poem by Lau Thiam Kok

We are a piece of a poem
Can be written can be sung
Bridged and unbridgeable
Like the ocean like the sky.
 
You are a piece of a poem
You are the cloud you are the wind
Touched and untouchable
Reached and unreachable
Like a dream and dreams.
 
I am a poem
I was the storm
Now I am the river
Melts in the ocean
Looking up at you looking up at you
(Who) sew my words (who) weave my dreams
In the blue land above me.

© 2008 Lau Thiam Kok


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With ink in our veins we can be everything we want or nothing at all. We can be a dream, we can be love or we can be thunder storms, with whatever the muse kisses us we can escape to it at every time of day or night in whatever place in the world ...

This is a wonderfully colorful metaphor. I like it very much - it's great!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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With ink in our veins we can be everything we want or nothing at all. We can be a dream, we can be love or we can be thunder storms, with whatever the muse kisses us we can escape to it at every time of day or night in whatever place in the world ...

This is a wonderfully colorful metaphor. I like it very much - it's great!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very beautiful and very sincere my friend. Loved the imagery that colours your well wrtten words. Will read of your writing soon.xx

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem with us. I like your comparisons, your imaginary and your metaphors!
Welcome here!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Lau Thiam Kok
Lau Thiam Kok

Budapest, VI., Hungary



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I have moved all my writing to my personal website. Please check them out at: https://lauthiamkok.net/poetic Born in Penang, Malaysia. Studied Bachelor of Applied Arts at University Malaysia Sar.. more..

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