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We bring our thoughts so quietly
but in desperation hope
for empathy.  From home
to those across the seas,
we're reaching out to no one
except everyone.  Pathetic,
we all say with scornful eyes
thoughts going wild, yet
we all need something to lean on.

Reviews

[Vanessa]

Simple, likeable, and relatable. You point out an undeniable truth about the human condition. . . we're always seeking to connect. My only criticsim is that I would have liked to have read more. :)